SidSinister's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Do Us Part]

No.

Didn't like it.

ShockTsunami responds:

Flash by SidSinister:
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[story of a loser]

Close.

Graphics - 6

Well done. The characters moved smoothly and all the ideas you tried to portray were portrayed without question.

Style - 3

Good quality, but nothing out of the ordinary yet. It looks like Japanese Anime (Chibi-sh). I would give you more style points if you had a more unique animation form.

Sound - 1

I didn't like the song. Not really your fault. Except that you picked it.

Violence - 1

Good violence. It's nothing too amazing.

Overall - 2

The reason Overall score was so low is because pf the subject matter, the apparently ongoing struggle of the loser. The part I didn't like was how you made it seem like the "cool kids" were little Satan worshipers who pummel anyone not wearing glasses (I know why you made them look the same but that's bad, too). Plus, he wouldn't be the only "uncool" kid, that doesn't make any sense by the stereotype. (Which you followed) I don't think that an average looking person (as you animated him) would have been treated so roughly without due cause, that's a fallacy.

Good Animation, Bad Story. Try using more original material. You have potential; just stop trying to go for the emotional path. Not everything in the world is molested with an emotion.