Didn't like it.
Flash by SidSinister:
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Graphics - 6
Well done. The characters moved smoothly and all the ideas you tried to portray were portrayed without question.
Style - 3
Good quality, but nothing out of the ordinary yet. It looks like Japanese Anime (Chibi-sh). I would give you more style points if you had a more unique animation form.
Sound - 1
I didn't like the song. Not really your fault. Except that you picked it.
Violence - 1
Good violence. It's nothing too amazing.
Overall - 2
The reason Overall score was so low is because pf the subject matter, the apparently ongoing struggle of the loser. The part I didn't like was how you made it seem like the "cool kids" were little Satan worshipers who pummel anyone not wearing glasses (I know why you made them look the same but that's bad, too). Plus, he wouldn't be the only "uncool" kid, that doesn't make any sense by the stereotype. (Which you followed) I don't think that an average looking person (as you animated him) would have been treated so roughly without due cause, that's a fallacy.
Good Animation, Bad Story. Try using more original material. You have potential; just stop trying to go for the emotional path. Not everything in the world is molested with an emotion.
This song would be reall good if you tried to use a little EQing and some more complex sounds. I really like the galloping beat, very nice.
The song isn't bad. The song itself is kind of simple, not too much happening. This makes it nice on the ear, but I think most songs deserve some focal point, this one was a bit lacking. I personally like songs with some pick-up, there was some after the "Suck my fucking cock" computer vox break. It's got a beat though.
Yeah, thanks I find it easy to listen too, not really too loud, but yeah I could have fit more action into there. Thanks for the helpful review
I was waiting for the song to jump up at me, and kick me in the throught, but I guess I should have looked at the song's title first, "insomnia", It fits its situation well.
It's not a bad song, I just didn't like it all that much. Well put togeather, I didn't like it.
(Check out my new song) (C'mon I didn't mean what I said.) (Do it.)
Fair enough, presonally I think it´s one of my best songs so far. :D
I´ll try to chekc ur stuff out when i get teh time, that i shall!
Thanx alot for the review!
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